Aloha Benjamin, I like the way you have shared your learning about Hawaii. It would be interesting to add some writing about why you were earning about Hawaii and what you enjoyed or found challenging. Mrs Krausse
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Aloha Benjamin,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have shared your learning about Hawaii. It would be interesting to add some writing about why you were earning about Hawaii and what you enjoyed or found challenging.
Mrs Krausse